Re: Additional Chapter for Tutorial

On 18.07.20 19:17, Erik Rijkers wrote:
>
> Hi,
>
> I went through the architecture.sgml file once, and accumulated the 
> attached edits.
>
> There are still far too many Unneeded Capitals On Words for my taste 
> but I have not changed many of those. We could use some more opinions 
> on that, I suppose. (if it becomes too silent maybe include the 
> pgsql-hackers again?)
>
> Thanks,
>
>
> Erik Rijkers

The attached patch contains:

- integration of Erik's suggestions

- coordination of terms in text, graphic and glossary

- some changes in upper-case usage

- fewer usage of <firstterm> with two exceptions: The first chapter 4.1 
emphasize all important terms to help beginners in their learning 
process; chapter 4.5. emphasize the term 'autovacuum' to straighten the 
fact that - despite its similarities - the tool autovacuum is something 
else than the SQL command vacuum.


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Jürgen Purtz