Re: Not an error but a difficult wording
Laurenz Albe <laurenz.albe@cybertec.at>
From: Laurenz Albe <laurenz.albe@cybertec.at>
To: riivo.kolka@gmail.com, pgsql-docs@lists.postgresql.org
Date: 2023-01-25T22:21:13Z
Lists: pgsql-docs
On Wed, 2023-01-25 at 08:22 +0000, PG Doc comments form wrote: > The following documentation comment has been logged on the website: > > Page: https://www.postgresql.org/docs/15/sourcerepo.html > Description: > > https://www.postgresql.org/docs/current/sourcerepo.html > > I was convinced that there was a missing word or something in > "because the files that these tools are used to build are included in the > tarball" > I had to read this several times, until I saw that it was actually > correct. > > Maybe this would be better? (I don't know the comma rules) > "because the files(,?) that are generated/processed by these tools(,?) are > already included in the tarball" +1 Correct English would be: These tools are not needed to build from a distribution tarball, because the files generated by these tools are included in the tarball. Yours, Laurenz Albe
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Doc: use less-awkward phrasing.
- e35bb9f1582d 16.0 landed