Re: Documentation improvement patch

Daniel Gustafsson <daniel@yesql.se>

From: Daniel Gustafsson <daniel@yesql.se>
To: Oleg Sibiryakov <o.sibiryakov@postgrespro.ru>
Cc: pgsql-docs@lists.postgresql.org
Date: 2024-09-06T13:20:29Z
Lists: pgsql-docs
> On 5 Sep 2024, at 11:33, Oleg Sibiryakov <o.sibiryakov@postgrespro.ru> wrote:
> 
> Dear all,
> I have prepared a patch containing some minor inconsistencies in the documentation. Please, take a look.
> The inconsistencies were noticed by: Ekaterina Kiryanova, Elena Indrupskaya, Maxim Yablokov, Anna Uraskova, Elena Karavaeva, and me. 
> We will be looking forward to your feedback.
> The patch shall be applied to the REL_17_STABLE branch.

Most of these seem fine, but I need another read-through to digest them fully.
Just a few small comments:

-        Specifies the builtin provider locale for the database default
-        collation order and character classification, overriding the setting
-        <xref linkend="create-database-locale"/>.  The <link
+        Specifies the <literal>builtin</literal> provider locale for the database
+        default collation order and character classification, overriding the
+        setting <xref linkend="create-database-locale"/>.  The <link
and
-        Specifies the locale name when the builtin provider is used. Locale support
-        is described in <xref linkend="locale"/>.
+        Specifies the locale name when the <literal>builtin</literal> provider
+        is used. Locale support is described in <xref linkend="locale"/>.


I don't think this use of "builtin" refers to the config value but rather the
type of locale, so I think it's correct to not use <literal> here.


-    for not-null constraints at all, so they are not
+    for <literal>NOT NULL</literal> constraints at all, so they are not

This seems mostly to be a question of taste, I don't think not-null is
incorrect here.

--
Daniel Gustafsson




Commits

  1. doc: Missing markup, punctuation and wordsmithing