Re: DOCS - Add introductory paragraph to Getting Started chapter

Chao Li <li.evan.chao@gmail.com>

From: Chao Li <li.evan.chao@gmail.com>
To: Dragos Andriciuc <dragos.andriciuc@percona.com>
Cc: "David G. Johnston" <david.g.johnston@gmail.com>, Philip Alger <paalger0@gmail.com>, Andreas Karlsson <andreas@proxel.se>, "pgsql-hackers@postgresql.org" <pgsql-hackers@postgresql.org>
Date: 2026-02-26T08:48:25Z
Lists: pgsql-hackers

> On Feb 20, 2026, at 01:04, Dragos Andriciuc <dragos.andriciuc@percona.com> wrote:
> 
> Hello,
> 
> The chapter currently opens directly with a list of subsections and no introductory text.
> 
> This differs from the structure used in other chapters, but I understand the preference for avoiding redundancy with the ToC.
> 
> I've revised the introduction to simplify the structure and avoid restating the table of contents too directly, merging the two sentences into one.
> 
> Attached is v3.
> 
> 
> 
> From: David G. Johnston <david.g.johnston@gmail.com>
> Sent: Thursday, February 19, 2026 6:14 PM
> To: Philip Alger <paalger0@gmail.com>
> Cc: Dragos Andriciuc <dragos.andriciuc@percona.com>; Andreas Karlsson <andreas@proxel.se>; pgsql-hackers@postgresql.org <pgsql-hackers@postgresql.org>
> Subject: Re: DOCS - Add introductory paragraph to Getting Started chapter
>  On Thu, Feb 19, 2026 at 6:51 AM Philip Alger <paalger0@gmail.com> wrote:
> 
> 
> On Thu, Feb 19, 2026 at 3:58 AM Dragos Andriciuc <dragos.andriciuc@percona.com> wrote:
> Thanks for pointing that out. The intention was to add two paragraphs and it is now corrected to use
> two separate <para> tags. Attached is v2 of the patch.
> 
> I have verified that the docs build and render correctly in HTML locally.
> 
> 
> Hello,
> 
> It's always good to add more documentation. I wouldn't consider two single sentences as separate paragraphs though. 
> 
> However, I think these sentences can be combined into one.
> 
> For example:
> 
> This chapter provides a practical introduction to <productname>PostgreSQL</productname>
> by guiding you through software installation, basic architectural concepts, and how to create and access 
> your first database.
> 
> I think this version combines the two essentially.
> 
>  All that does is put the existing Table of Contents into paragraph form.  I'd keep the second sentence and let the ToC speak for itself personally.  Or put a bit more effort into saying something about those topics that a ToC header cannot convey.  I'm fine with the status quo though, at least compared to the proposed.
> 
> Probably should make 'server', 'client' and 'database' links to the glossary - though the architecture page will also provide detail if they perform a linear read.
> 
> Looking at this more critically, why does installation come before architecture?  I would expect architecture to include information that improves understanding what is being installed and why.  Or, more generally, theory before practice.
> 
> Suggestion:
> <para>
> [First] This chapter provides a brief introduction to the concepts and terminology employed in PostgreSQL's design.  [Then] It also walks you through getting a server and client installed on your machine and ensuring it is functioning by creating a new database and connecting to it via the command line client.
> </para>
> 
> David J.
> 
> 
> <v3-0001-Add-introductory-paragraph-to-Getting-Started-chapter.patch>

V3 seems very polished. I agree the new paragraph is a helpful improvement for new doc readers.

Best regards,
--
Chao Li (Evan)
HighGo Software Co., Ltd.
https://www.highgo.com/