Re: DOCS - Add introductory paragraph to Getting Started chapter
Chao Li <li.evan.chao@gmail.com>
From: Chao Li <li.evan.chao@gmail.com>
To: Dragos Andriciuc <dragos.andriciuc@percona.com>
Cc: "David G. Johnston" <david.g.johnston@gmail.com>,
Philip Alger <paalger0@gmail.com>,
Andreas Karlsson <andreas@proxel.se>,
"pgsql-hackers@postgresql.org" <pgsql-hackers@postgresql.org>
Date: 2026-02-26T08:48:25Z
Lists: pgsql-hackers
> On Feb 20, 2026, at 01:04, Dragos Andriciuc <dragos.andriciuc@percona.com> wrote: > > Hello, > > The chapter currently opens directly with a list of subsections and no introductory text. > > This differs from the structure used in other chapters, but I understand the preference for avoiding redundancy with the ToC. > > I've revised the introduction to simplify the structure and avoid restating the table of contents too directly, merging the two sentences into one. > > Attached is v3. > > > > From: David G. Johnston <david.g.johnston@gmail.com> > Sent: Thursday, February 19, 2026 6:14 PM > To: Philip Alger <paalger0@gmail.com> > Cc: Dragos Andriciuc <dragos.andriciuc@percona.com>; Andreas Karlsson <andreas@proxel.se>; pgsql-hackers@postgresql.org <pgsql-hackers@postgresql.org> > Subject: Re: DOCS - Add introductory paragraph to Getting Started chapter > On Thu, Feb 19, 2026 at 6:51 AM Philip Alger <paalger0@gmail.com> wrote: > > > On Thu, Feb 19, 2026 at 3:58 AM Dragos Andriciuc <dragos.andriciuc@percona.com> wrote: > Thanks for pointing that out. The intention was to add two paragraphs and it is now corrected to use > two separate <para> tags. Attached is v2 of the patch. > > I have verified that the docs build and render correctly in HTML locally. > > > Hello, > > It's always good to add more documentation. I wouldn't consider two single sentences as separate paragraphs though. > > However, I think these sentences can be combined into one. > > For example: > > This chapter provides a practical introduction to <productname>PostgreSQL</productname> > by guiding you through software installation, basic architectural concepts, and how to create and access > your first database. > > I think this version combines the two essentially. > > All that does is put the existing Table of Contents into paragraph form. I'd keep the second sentence and let the ToC speak for itself personally. Or put a bit more effort into saying something about those topics that a ToC header cannot convey. I'm fine with the status quo though, at least compared to the proposed. > > Probably should make 'server', 'client' and 'database' links to the glossary - though the architecture page will also provide detail if they perform a linear read. > > Looking at this more critically, why does installation come before architecture? I would expect architecture to include information that improves understanding what is being installed and why. Or, more generally, theory before practice. > > Suggestion: > <para> > [First] This chapter provides a brief introduction to the concepts and terminology employed in PostgreSQL's design. [Then] It also walks you through getting a server and client installed on your machine and ensuring it is functioning by creating a new database and connecting to it via the command line client. > </para> > > David J. > > > <v3-0001-Add-introductory-paragraph-to-Getting-Started-chapter.patch> V3 seems very polished. I agree the new paragraph is a helpful improvement for new doc readers. Best regards, -- Chao Li (Evan) HighGo Software Co., Ltd. https://www.highgo.com/