Re: doc: create table improvements

David G. Johnston <david.g.johnston@gmail.com>

From: "David G. Johnston" <david.g.johnston@gmail.com>
To: Laurenz Albe <laurenz.albe@cybertec.at>
Cc: Peter Eisentraut <peter@eisentraut.org>, PostgreSQL Hackers <pgsql-hackers@lists.postgresql.org>, jian he <jian.universality@gmail.com>
Date: 2025-10-20T11:41:39Z
Lists: pgsql-hackers
On Monday, October 20, 2025, Laurenz Albe <laurenz.albe@cybertec.at> wrote:

> On Thu, 2025-10-16 at 15:19 +0200, Laurenz Albe wrote:
> > Attached is version 3.
>
> David, do you as the original patch author want to comment?
> The patch is "waiting for author".
>

Thanks,

I question whether “parameter” is even the correct class to assign here and
so would rather avoid the issue by not assigning a class.

“If none is specified, the data will be persistent” would be better written
“If unspecified the data will be persistent” (or, “if not specified…”)

Everything else looks good.

David J.