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Re: DOCS - pg_replication_slot . Fix the 'inactive_since' description

Peter Smith <smithpb2250@gmail.com>

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From: Peter Smith <smithpb2250@gmail.com>
To: Bruce Momjian <bruce@momjian.us>
Cc: "David G. Johnston" <david.g.johnston@gmail.com>, Ashutosh Bapat <ashutosh.bapat.oss@gmail.com>, Kyotaro Horiguchi <horikyota.ntt@gmail.com>, Amit Kapila <amit.kapila16@gmail.com>, shveta.malik@gmail.com, pgsql-hackers@lists.postgresql.org
Date: 2024-10-23T21:32:54Z
Lists: pgsql-hackers 
Hi. Here are a couple of minor comments.

1.
+        The time slot synchronization (see <xref
+        linkend="logicaldecoding-replication-slots-synchronization"/>)
+        was most recently stopped.

/The time slot/The time when slot/

~~~

2.
- /* The time since the slot has become inactive */
+ /* The time slot sychronized was stopped. */


Maybe just make this comment the same as the sentence used in the docs:
- e.g. add "when"; fix, typo "sychronized", etc.


/The time slot sychronized was stopped./The time when slot
synchronization was most recently stopped./

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Kind Regards,
Peter Smith.
Fujitsu Australia

Commits

  1. Doc: Clarify the `inactive_since` field description.

  2. Change last_inactive_time to inactive_since in pg_replication_slots.