Re: [DOC] Update ALTER SUBSCRIPTION documentation v3

Den ons 17 maj 2023 kl 03:18 skrev Peter Smith <smithpb2250@gmail.com>:
>
> + errhint("Use %s to disassociate the subscription from the slot after
> disabling the subscription.",
>
> IMO it looked strange having the word "subscription" 2x in the same sentence.
>
> Maybe you can reword the errhint like:
>
> BEFORE
> "Use %s to disassociate the subscription from the slot after disabling
> the subscription."
>
> SUGGESTION#1
> "Disable the subscription, then use %s to disassociate it from the slot."
>
> SUGGESTION#2
> "After disabling the subscription use %s to disassociate it from the slot."
>
> ~~~
>
> BTW, it is a bit difficult to follow this thread because the subject
> keeps changing.
>
> ------
> Kind Regards,
> Peter Smith.
> Fujitsu Australia

Good catch, I definitely agree. I'm sorry about changing the subject
line, I'm unaccustomed to mailing lists -- I'll leave it as it is now.

Attached is the revised version.

Best regards,
Robert Sjöblom

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