Re: Additional Chapter for Tutorial

Erik Rijkers <er@xs4all.nl>

From: Erik Rijkers <er@xs4all.nl>
To: Jürgen Purtz <juergen@purtz.de>
Cc: PostgreSQL Hackers <pgsql-hackers@lists.postgresql.org>, Justin Pryzby <pryzby@telsasoft.com>, "David G. Johnston" <david.g.johnston@gmail.com>
Date: 2020-11-07T19:15:07Z
Lists: pgsql-hackers, pgsql-docs

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On 2020-11-07 13:24, Jürgen Purtz wrote:
>> 
> Because there have been no more comments in the last days I created a
> consolidated patch. It contains Erik's suggestion and some tweaks for
> the text size within graphics.
> 
> [0011-architecture.patch]

Hi,

I went through architecture.sgml once more; some proposed changes 
attached.

And in some .svg files I noticed 'jungest' which should be 'youngest', I 
suppose.
I did not change them but below is filelist of  grep -l 'jung'.

./doc/src/sgml/images/freeze-ink.svg
./doc/src/sgml/images/freeze-ink-svgo.svg
./doc/src/sgml/images/freeze-raw.svg
./doc/src/sgml/images/wraparound-ink.svg
./doc/src/sgml/images/wraparound-ink-svgo.svg
./doc/src/sgml/images/wraparound-raw.svg


Thanks,

Erik


Commits

  1. Align some terms in arch-dev.sgml to glossary

  2. doc: Copy-edit the "Overview of PostgreSQL Internals" chapter

  3. Merge postmaster and postgres command into just postgres. postmaster