Re: 2023-08-10 release announcement draft

Jonathan S. Katz <jkatz@postgresql.org>

From: "Jonathan S. Katz" <jkatz@postgresql.org>

To: Robert Treat <rob@xzilla.net>

Cc: PostgreSQL Hackers <pgsql-hackers@lists.postgresql.org>

Date: 2023-08-10T02:10:44Z

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Release notes for 15.4, 14.9, 13.12, 12.16, 11.21.
- accf4f84887e 15.4 cited

On 8/8/23 11:13 PM, Robert Treat wrote:

> "Users who have skipped one or more update releases may need to run
> additional, post-update steps; "
> 
> The comma should be removed.
> 
> "please see the release notes for earlier versions for details."
> 
> Use of 'for' twice is grammatically incorrect; I am partial to "please
> see the release notes from earlier versions for details." but could
> also see "please see the release notes for earlier versions to get
> details."

Interestingly, I think this language has been unmodified for awhile. 
Upon reading it, I agree, and took your suggestions.

Thanks,

Jonathan