Re: PostgreSQL 17 Beta 1 release announcement draft

On 5/16/24 1:15 AM, Bertrand Drouvot wrote:
> Hi,
> 
> On Wed, May 15, 2024 at 09:45:35PM -0400, Jonathan S. Katz wrote:
>> Hi,
>>
>> Attached is a copy of the PostgreSQL 17 Beta 1 release announcement draft.
> 
> Thanks for working on it!
> 
> I've one comment:
> 
>> PostgreSQL 17 also introduces a new view, [`pg_wait_events`](https://www.postgresql.org/docs/17/view-pg-wait-events.html), which provides descriptions about wait events and can be combined with `pg_stat_activity` to give more insight into an operation.
> 
> Instead of "to give more insight into an operation", what about "to give more
> insight about what a session is waiting for (should it be active)"?

I put:

"to give more in insight into why a session is blocked."

Does that work?

Jonathan