Re: pgsql: Add TCP keepalive support to libpq.

Robert Haas <robertmhaas@gmail.com> wrote:
 
> Here's an attempt at rewording the sections so that the
> information is included in each parameter's description without
> taking up a whole sentence.
> 
> Thoughts?
 
It makes the point without beating one over the head with it.  I
particularly like the way this patch moves the main point of the
parameter to the front, with all the conditions under which it might
be ignored pushed farther back.  It reads much better that way, at
least for me.
 
-Kevin