0001-Updates-to-CREATE-INDEX-documentation.patch

From eaf42cd9f014a2420339afbd89be2e5f35cf49e7 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: "Jonathan S. Katz" <jonathan.katz@excoventures.com>
Date: Sat, 13 Oct 2018 15:38:18 -0400
Subject: [PATCH 1/2] Updates to CREATE INDEX documentation.

Includes clarifications on new functionality availability in PostgreSQL 11,
as well as some language cleanups

Author: Justin Pryzby
Reviewed-by: Jonathan Katz
---
 doc/src/sgml/ref/create_index.sgml | 15 ++++++++-------
 1 file changed, 8 insertions(+), 7 deletions(-)

diff --git a/doc/src/sgml/ref/create_index.sgml b/doc/src/sgml/ref/create_index.sgml
index 3c1223b324..3424733851 100644
--- a/doc/src/sgml/ref/create_index.sgml
+++ b/doc/src/sgml/ref/create_index.sgml
@@ -612,11 +612,12 @@ Indexes:
 
    <para>
     Regular index builds permit other regular index builds on the
-    same table to occur in parallel, but only one concurrent index build
-    can occur on a table at a time.  In both cases, no other types of schema
-    modification on the table are allowed meanwhile.  Another difference
-    is that a regular <command>CREATE INDEX</command> command can be performed within
-    a transaction block, but <command>CREATE INDEX CONCURRENTLY</command> cannot.
+    same table to occur simultaneously, but only one concurrent index build
+    can occur on a table at a time.  In either case, schema modification of the
+    table is not allowed while the index is being built.  Another difference is
+    that a regular <command>CREATE INDEX</command> command can be performed
+    within a transaction block, but <command>CREATE INDEX CONCURRENTLY</command>
+    cannot.
    </para>
   </refsect2>
  </refsect1>
@@ -650,7 +651,7 @@ Indexes:
    ordering. For example, we might want to sort a complex-number data
    type either by absolute value or by real part. We could do this by
    defining two operator classes for the data type and then selecting
-   the proper class when making an index.  More information about
+   the proper class when creating an index.  More information about
    operator classes is in <xref linkend="indexes-opclass"/> and in <xref
    linkend="xindex"/>.
   </para>
@@ -673,7 +674,7 @@ Indexes:
    valid, once all partitions acquire the index.)  Note, however, that
    any partition that is created in the future using
    <command>CREATE TABLE ... PARTITION OF</command> will automatically
-   contain the index regardless of whether this option was specified.
+   contain the index regardless of <literal>ONLY</literal> being specified.
   </para>
 
   <para>
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